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Chapter 1 - Page 32: Inopportunity Doesn't Knock - by kenisu3000

Chapter 1 - Page 32: Inopportunity Doesn't Knock




kenisu - #32
I like the unintended effect I created in the background of the "Bad Enough Dude" panel. Ninten gloats, but very visibly behind him, the black cloud out the window has not yet departed. I didn't even catch the irony until I finished the panel.
Also, I was playing around with the idea of Ninten saying "Shoot... and I thought 'The Brave Little Toaster' was farfetched!" when looking at the destroyed lamp in disgust, but I already wanted the "Bad Enough Dude" line, and I figured working in two whole retro culture references one after the other would just be in bad taste, especially considering that I've already gone over the top with those culture references! There's a couple more I want to throw in before the end of the chapter though, so just... humor me.
And on a much relieved note, this is the last page to feature Ninten's room for a long time! All I can say is... THANK GOODNESS! I was getting so freaking sick of that stupid Garfield poster, and I'm sure everyone else was too.



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kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 78: Deus ex Shirt-Mender
kenisu - #78
Well, *that* was a cheap plot device! ...Oh wait. I wrote it.
4/16/10 0.00
kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 79: A Flustered Mom
kenisu - #79
I have to wonder what people thought of that "I knew somebody was in trouble" panel back in its Halloween days... since, of course, back then, I hadn't yet submitted the pages containing the subplot at the end of Chapter 1, where Ninten feels a sense of danger to someone not far off.
4/21/10 0.00
kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 80: Despair Creeps In
kenisu - #80
Wow... this Lauren character is pretty tactless, isn't she? Come to think of it, I guess in a roundabout way, it's almost a reflection of a certain other tactless "good news/bad news" scene from the MOTHER series.
4/29/10 0.00
kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 81: Fade to Black
kenisu - #81
Camel's back = BROKEN.
Looking over my original of this page from two/three years ago, I noticed something I had forgotten about. A faint erasure can be seen in the sky, in the panel where Marilyn is on the ground (you probably can't see it here, since this is photocopy, and a colored one at that). It's a speech balloon of Marilyn going "AcK... gAHhh..." and it's accompanied by the sound effect "twitch twitch". All I can say is: *wow*, I'm really glad I recognized the mood killer there when I did.
5/5/10 0.00
kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 82: Emergency
kenisu - #82
There's something about that river, and the trees beyond it, that make me wish I could live there.
5/17/10 0.00

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