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Chapter 1 - Page 62: Words From the Past - by kenisu3000

Chapter 1 - Page 62: Words From the Past




kenisu - #62
One of the most annoying things about trying to make a fleshed-out story of MOTHER: most of the characters don't have a last name. So I have to dance all around these nonexistent names in places where, by all means in real life, the full name would be used. In this case, the title page of George's diary. I wanted the diary to be faded and blotched to begin with (to give it that "antique" look), so I used that to my advantage and ran my thumb over a smudge of graphite, covering the area where George's surname would be. I love these little nuance conveniences.
As for the password, it was only recently, when I went to draw over the sketch, that I finally realized the connection between the two parts of the code: _Where is God's Tail?_ is the prompt, and _Lost on the ship that sails the heavens_ is the answer. The second part isn't clarifying _what_ God's Tail is (my old translations read "The item left behind" instead of "Lost"), it's clarifying _where_ the Tail is.
...Though I still wonder what I was thinking when I chose _lost_ as a "translation" of _wasuremono_. In that case, _left behind_ would still have worked.



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kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 70: Clash of the Bumpkins
kenisu - #70
I look back on this and wonder, why isn't Ninten getting as much use out of that bat as he can? Was I so absent-minded at the time I didn't even think to have him bash the crows, even though he's got the thing *right there in his hand*?
4/16/10 0.00
kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 71: When Evil Reared its Ugly Head...
kenisu - #71
Character development can be painful. It's actually starting to annoy *me* how much of a wuss Ninten is this early on.
Still, you try taking on that many foes by yourself, with nothing but a tattered old baseball bat...
4/16/10 0.00
kenisu3000 Chapter 1 - Page 37: Ninten Takes Responsibility
kenisu - #37
It wasn't until I started this page when I realized that the Tattered Bat Ninten's been carrying around is in his hand in some panels... and not there in others. The first time I screwed up was on the last page, when the door slams behind him and Minnie. And here in the first panel, I guessed he just must have... switched it to his left hand so that he could use his inhaler. Yeah.
5/27/07 0.00
kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 72: Hippie, Be Good
kenisu - #72
You're just not a MOTHER fan if you're not hearing the Hippie theme music here.
4/16/10 0.00
kenisu3000 Chapter 2 - Page 73: Don't Insult My MOTHER
kenisu - #73
Much as I wanted to leave the backgrounds of panels 2 and 3 plain white, I caved and colored them in. As you can see.
And it's probably easy enough to guess, but the Hippie's prayer was originally "Ekke, ekke, ekke, ekke, p'tang, zoo-boing, zow zing". I'm not sure if I felt that Monty Python references are hardly even funny anymore now that everyone gets them, or if I felt too much like I was swiping the phrase in slimeball fashion, but either way, eventually I just invented my own chant for him.
4/16/10 0.00

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