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Prologue - Page 17: Town Anxiety - by kenisu3000

Prologue - Page 17: Town Anxiety




kenisu - #17
Ever since I finished EB Zero back in 2000, whenever I imagined George poring over his notes, I pictured him sitting at a scanty table in a dark, dank basement scene. It feels soooo nice to be able to put these long-time mental images on paper.
Also, I was originally going to color the mayor's over-vest red, but then when I looked at the next-to-last panel (where he's silencing Suzannah), I realized that I made him look awfully Russian, so instead, I colored his vest blue. And speaking of Suzannah, I think I may have made yet another historical oopsie here: back in those days, women had very few privileges, so what are several women doing at a TOWN COUNCIL MEETING? Of course, from the very beginning, I knew I wanted the characters to have some sort of audience with the mayor to discuss the situation with George, but originally it was supposed to be a small enclosed meeting with her, James, a FEW involved townsfolk, and the mayor; but eventually it evolved into a full-out town council meeting.
At any rate, I needed Suzannah present to be able to move the story forward. So I fudged a little.



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kenisu3000 Chapter 1 - Page 33: A Force Beyond Control
kenisu - #33
Shading can be a beast on pages like this one.
4/19/07 0.00
kenisu3000 Chapter 1 - Page 34: The Main Course
kenisu - #34
I think I might have been hungry when I wrote that "appetizer" line of Ninten's. Speaking of food, the orange-and-tan coloring on the dollhouse on the very bottom of the page makes me hungry for a Peanut Cheese Bar. BOING!
4/19/07 0.00
kenisu3000 Chapter 1 - Page 35: Shut Up
kenisu - #35
I know plenty of households where the children are put in time out if they use naughty language like "shut up".
I looked at this after I finished it and I realized that Minnie's keeping her composure quite well through all this craziness. Whatever.
All I know is, I had been chomping at the bit to get out of Ninten's room, and now I'm already chomping at the bit to get out of Mimmie's Room! I hereby dub this room Purple Hell.
5/5/07 0.00
kenisu3000 Chapter 1 - Page 36: Kreepy Kewpie and the Son of Lampy
kenisu - #36
...I honestly don't have anything to say here. I suppose this is one of those "in-betweener" pages.
5/12/07 0.00
kenisu3000 Chapter 1 - Page 37: Ninten Takes Responsibility
kenisu - #37
It wasn't until I started this page when I realized that the Tattered Bat Ninten's been carrying around is in his hand in some panels... and not there in others. The first time I screwed up was on the last page, when the door slams behind him and Minnie. And here in the first panel, I guessed he just must have... switched it to his left hand so that he could use his inhaler. Yeah.
5/27/07 0.00

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