Author   |
Title |
Description |
Date |
Rank |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 2 |
earthfelt2 - #02
Page 14: OH MY GOD!!!! THEIR MOM'S A TEENAGER!!!! |
2/5/10 | 0.00 |
| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 3 |
earthfelt2 - #03
Page 15: they're forced out of the house with psi transport omega, when starman XXM attacks, and their mom's arm turns into a... laser cannon? |
2/8/10 | 0.00 |
| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 4 |
earthfelt2 - #04
Page 16: Their house explodes in a fiery inferno!!! |
2/8/10 | 0.00 |
| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 5 |
earthfelt2 - #05
Page 17: Before Nina starts a crying fit, the mechanism attaches to Terry's wrist (unintentional Ben 10 reference) and their mom starts to tell them all they need to know. |
2/8/10 | 0.00 |
| ghostgirl21696 | Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 6 |
earthfelt2 - #06
Page 18: a couple of errors, Jeff isn't the only one dead, he's the only one alive, The descendants are of the different 8 kids not just Paula and Ness. Originally, Ness was the grandfather, but the year scheme didn't fit. And one other thing, the Giygas resurrection program!!? That's disturbing(and an idea for a spin off...) |
2/8/10 | 0.00 |
