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The Dire War of the Guys from Two Different Cultures in Battlefire Engulfed Deep Darkness - by Elobo

The Dire War of the Guys from Two Different Cultures in Battlefire Engulfed Deep Darkness




[FANFEST - War Between Saturn and Tenda] The Saturns coveted what the Tendas had: spices, truffles, bird phones. Their relations with this race were strained to the breaking point, however. They thought the Tenda were a weak race unworthy of their gifts. After fulfilling their duties to the Chosen in 199X, they decided to move in on their bitter foes and take their treasures for their own (for use in fancy dress balls). They expected a clean sweep. But the Tendas were no longer meek. They had quickly grown as a species and solidified the relations between their tribes. They became bolder and bolder, and soon began to prepare for the inevitable. Now, on their home turf, they aren't about to relinquish it without a fight.

For the submission to the site proper I fixed the title, ha ha. There is one thing I can't fix, however, in the art. It's a pretty striking snafu when you catch it, but I've already submitted it so I can't go back and tidy it up ;).



Other Submissions by Elobo

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Elobo Sunshine In the Forest Page 6
SunshineForest - #07
There are a few wordy pages in this books, ie: betwixt. I firmly believe that the audience shouldn't be patronized. Kids should ask questions about stories regardless, so some vocabulary thrown into the mix can't hurt.
7/16/09 0.00
Elobo Sunshine In the Forest Page 7
SunshineForest - #08
Here's that focal mechanism again. The sun is important to this story, it often sets an unstated mood. But look in the background, a kid will make the connection between it being there now, and somewhere else on a later page. It marks that arrow lizard as something Bushie will interact with.
7/16/09 0.00
Elobo Sunshine In the Forest Page 8
SunshineForest - #09
I've waited until this page to talk about environment malleability. The art style allows me to bend the world to the story's emotional whim. It is subtle, but it gives me that freedom.
7/16/09 0.00
Elobo Sunshine In the Forest Page 9
SunshineForest - #10
Here's the payoff from Page 7.
7/16/09 0.00
Elobo Sunshine In the Forest Page 11
SunshineForest - #12
Here's a new character, his demeanor should be an offset from the rest of the scene.
7/16/09 0.00

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