Other Submissions by ghostgirl21696
|ghostgirl21696||Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 5||
earthfelt2 - #05
Page 17: Before Nina starts a crying fit, the mechanism attaches to Terry's wrist (unintentional Ben 10 reference) and their mom starts to tell them all they need to know.
|ghostgirl21696||Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 50||
earthfelt2 - #50
Page 62: Sasa takes a happy attack and Terry gets defensive. Oh C'mon, you'd probably hug everyone in the room if you were in his situation, and (maybe) you'd feel awkward if your sister was given a friend hug by a boy.
|ghostgirl21696||Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 51||
earthfelt2 - #51
Page 63: other than the little brother quip, this page is completely serious. do not laugh.
|ghostgirl21696||Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 52||
earthfelt2 - #52
Page 64: End of Chapter 1.
|ghostgirl21696||Earthfelt: chapter 1 page 6||
earthfelt2 - #06
Page 18: a couple of errors, Jeff isn't the only one dead, he's the only one alive, The descendants are of the different 8 kids not just Paula and Ness. Originally, Ness was the grandfather, but the year scheme didn't fit. And one other thing, the Giygas resurrection program!!? That's disturbing(and an idea for a spin off...)